Ight then
Final chord of the progression is in a different key compared to the song and doesn't flow well, i see what your going for but it doesn't work,
Half of the synths on those chords are useless fluff and could be made with 1 maybe 2 if you don't feel like splitting it. First synth of the melody is just mimicking a tonematrix, all the old farts would love you if you swapped the 2.