How did this only chart in the singles but not in trap
Lyrics:
Thinkin bout the days when it wasnt right,
Dark roads ahead searching for the light.
Lost a couple friends to the life they chose,
Only thing i got left are the highs and lows.
Pain in my heart, i just hold it in,
Tryna keep my cool through the thick and thin.
Mama always prayed id stay on my grind,
Told me life gets hard, just give it time.
Slow down, yeah, im breathing deep,
Carryin weight but i still dont sleep.
Praying for peace but i got these scars,
Fightin for a dream that feels very far.
Seen the streets take the innocent too,
Kids grow up fast, thats only the truth
Pain dont heal, but we learn to cope,
Found a little strength when i lost some hope.
Life been rought but i keep my head,
Countin blessing when i go to bed.
Dreams got big, now im chasin more,
But i still remember who i do it for.
Slow down, yeah, im breathin deep,
Carryin weight but i still dont sleep.
Prayin for peace but i got these scars,
Fightin for a dream that feels so far.
One step closer every single day,
Working on myself, tryna find my way.
Hustle through the night till the sky turns blue,
Did it for my people, yeah, i stayed true
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SOMEWHERE IN THE NIGHT LOVES GONNA FIND YOU (it's an insider joke you wouldn't get it)
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actually good vocals niceeeee dude!
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i see you did this in bandlab, correct? if so, lower the Classic to about 22%, and it will be better, and same with what hurakan said, let em ring. other than that, its not bad for a vocal song. when i make mine, i usually take 4 or 5 tries, idk how many passes you took, but its actually not bad. i like the mood a lot, i like this style of music and i would love to work with you in the future dude.
Sincerely, Ben Erb
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bring the piano up a little bit
i would also say that you should put a bit more stereo on the vocals so they're not occupying the same space as the kick (so they don't drown each other out)
i don't really know anything about this genre so
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Great
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vocals way too filtered
let them ring out in the mix, not sit back idly
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nice
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ay bro u wont eva lose me
men cant even cope now of days
one: beat amazing
2 vocals if this is ur first time how da frick u aint nervoss or sum gng and too much autotune imo but other than that dude its amazing better than what i coud do
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Ayeee this is really good. Lokwey sounds kinda like Juice Wrld
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collab?
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it actually good
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damn man me liken this
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This is really good!
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My first time singing a song, the words that dont match the lyrics are improvisions i made by myself since i kinda can freestyle
