I mean. I hear what you're trying to do but it sounds really rushed. Like theres not even a sub bass, the sounds contrast too much so it sounds more like two noises mashed together than a drop. "Machine Guns" sounds are practically white noise. The sounds are so loud that it sounds like you tried to beef the drums up so nothing is really clear. I can't give you alot of techincal feedback tbh so ask someone on here with really good mixes.
