this reminds me of hollowheart from porter robinson, but I feel like the beginning is a little underwhelming.
1:07
that synth is washing out most of the synths, maybe make it quieter, and introduce a mild sub! you could also remove the low end from most of the synths if you do add a sub.
the melody is quite repetitive as well, i'd repeat the same chord progression but the melody changes from time to time. also during the drop, the lead should change to something more exciting!
2:15
's synth sounds out of tune, i think it's the notes. also per segment, I feel like goes a long time, I'm not sure. i hope this helps at least, this thing has potential!