I originally wanted to make this into a song. Story: The cathedral was too calm I had died but I can naturally regenrate my body so my sibling was the only one that actually passed. It was rough for me seeing their lifeless body all dressed in white. I after the funeral sat there with a bottle of Vodka and bloodshot eyes...It was too peaceful in here which is what you would expect but it was an uncomfortable sense of peace as if this wasnt the end. It was just the beginning of something.. (SOMEONE GIVE ADVICE ON WHAT I SHOULD ADD IN HERE)

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    Classick

    about 2 years ago

    TRACK 2

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    Jon Jon (/heski/)

    about 2 years ago

    Them percussions on point

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    Approaching Human

    about 2 years ago

    percs are sexy

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    laevent✨

    about 2 years ago

    Wow

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    synthy

    about 2 years ago

    really nice mood going on here man great job

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    amoeba

    about 2 years ago

    you could work on the atmospherics of this much more but i like the basic idea of what you have, its nice. one thing tho, the vocal gets a bit repetitive, so maybe you could pitch shift it using a pitch delay or something from time to time? or just take the little bit you repeat, put it in a machiniste and then change the pitch for certain notes. just a suggestion, but youve got something really good to go on, please finish it :)

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      Classick

      about 2 years ago

      I agree. I was wondering if anyone would say something about the vocals. Thanks for your advice. :))

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    amoeba

    about 2 years ago

    percussion is great tho

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    amoeba

    about 2 years ago

    oh one other thing, i really like how the beginning synth transforms keys (ur going from a Bb major/g minor scale to Ab major/f minor in a way that works which is cool) but at 00:12 youve got an E on the bottom end of that pattern that really sticks out, try moving it up by one note and it should be fine ;)

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    kawalli

    about 2 years ago

    really dig the vox and piano - some burial related part of me wants to throw the percs thru a filter and turn that synth into a reese bass lol. great stuff tho kiu

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      Classick

      about 2 years ago

      I was think about making the perc more impacting thanks for the suggestion :)

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    Clockwork Beats

    about 2 years ago

    this has chill vibes, i thought i left my youtube on the chill mix but i forgot i hit play on this xDDD

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    Classick

    about 2 years ago

    Republished

    added what I could without causing a computer glitch

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    Classick

    about 2 years ago

    Republished

    added what I could without causing a computer glitch

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