My entry to the contest.

Il go back and edit it before oficially enter it.

I would appreciate it if you point out or help me with anthing that sounds weird or stuff, because im a little iffy on a few of the parts.

Edit: Layered 2 new kicks

lowered some of the white noise drops

changed bpm from 130 to 131

lengthened the last melody

fixed the bass levels and melodies

Edit: Added snares, fixed the silence in middle

Extended beginning arp into main melody lfo rise

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  • nice sound good, and good luck.

  • nope made it myself

  • did you use a template for the trance progression?

  • AWESOME song. Lov the pads and cord progression at the begining. I also love the cymbol at 0.44 . I like the part starting at 2.45 =D

  • thanks raze, Il probably republish it within the next day with the final editing, its basically mor kick patterns towards the end, which is a little weak, and some fine tuning on the builds

  • i LOVE the kick

  • Thanks alot everyone !

  • Whoooooaaa awesome sauce got smothered on your song man!

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  • ya im gonna add a softer kick in the non chorus parts, like when the piano comes in and maybe in the intro, i tried snares and hats, they wernt to my liking but il search fo better samples

  • I can tell by your style. That's ok as a lot of great artists that I've heard around here so far don't fit under the "club" category. That's ok as I love all types of music and they all have there place but if you want to be a part of a "club" compilation you must get the people on the floor. For that you need either a very popular genre or a beat that grabs them all by the booboo. Nothing too fancy but steady. Snares and hats are a must in my humble opinion.

  • thanks alot The Mars Project, I dident really pay attention to the beat so thanks alot for that :), I also dont usually venture into club and dance music

  • It's an after party track. Which I love but if you want to enter the club contest try finding a beat with kicks, snares and hats. Then mix the 3 rhythm parts up. I hope this helps. Thanks for giving me your time and support and I'll do my best to return the favor as much as I can. Good luck in the contest.

  • I love the change starting at 1.35 . That effect is great. I'd like to use something like that my self. IMO the silence at 2.45 ? is too long. I'd bridge that gap somehow. I really like this track and all of your builds are fantastic. If you're entering this as a club track you need a steady beat that makes people want to stand up. This track is great as is but it's not a club track right now.

  • yeah this song definantly needs more bass .. or as polygon said "oomph" . but i love it man! .. im a lover of bass .. and thts all u need . and ur good to go man. :)