The plucks sound bland and boring, but I like the ambience surrounding it. The only thing I'd say is work better on your sound arrangement.
Hello This is music I recently made, feedback would be really helpful.This is only part one folks!
UNKNOWN DATE :
Chapter one:
Take care, be aware and show your flare.
Unknown IdenTitY: Fess up sergeant, I've got other things to worry about.I got taxes coming out the boatload and a family to take care of.
SERGEANT JACKSON : Do I look like I care about your goddamn taxes? Do I look like a landlord?
quit complaining or your gonna get more things coming your way faster than a Cheetah,Lynx Rider.
Lynx Rider: Sergeant you really do pack a punch in our industries, why though Bos-
SERGEANT JACKSON: Look young rookie these industries would not be held up today if there was not determination,grit and power, or as we call it DGP. Through out the days some of our spies lose hope as they are taken away in a cage or sentenced for execution but that does not mean you can give up.Show what you got.Rookies like yourself can fail but with your efforts success is high.
LYNX RIDER: . . . . Yessir
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I still do enjoy the ambience of the song. The Egyptian lead is also very cool and that little riser that comes in as well. Just to clarify I'm listening to this song in 2022, I never saw this comment until now so I hope I could help you better now than back then lol. But anyways now that I think of it this is a pretty nice soundtrack, it reminds me of the mining through the minecraft caves to be honest.
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but thanks for feedback.
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You mean the egyptian sounding thing or the bass.The plucks were supposed to be bass on purpose.
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uhh, I am proud of myself for getting my first rank, by my own.
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This song is like digital Egyptian stuff
Very noice
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I like this very much dude! I like the concept! This type of experimental music is right up my alley and is what I am currently working with and have for years. Just some small fixes, like from when the reverb starts the sound pops at some places but that's the only critical feedback I could give on this because as ØOB said it's hard to crit when it's experimental
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I might invite you and show you some stuff I've been working on. But feel free to invite me as well, I'd gladly collab
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But do tell me if you wanna collab on the music.
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But thnx tho.
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Nice. I cant give alot of crit as I feel youre going for something different, but I guess some of the notes are a little wierd for my taste and that I would add reverb on the plucks. Nice oe m8 :)
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we bout to play some resident evil in this bishh?? lol I like it
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i like the vibe
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its nice
