I accidentally deleted my original comment, it said that you need to make the sounds more smooth so they blend into each other, like party whispers or bonfire. I would take out some of the sounds because I think there's to many, also try putting a low melody throughout and layer the sounds above it so it sounds professional.bi am only trying yo help and honestly give my opinions so please don't get angry. :)
the start is cool but the bit ater the drop is kinda wierd... it would be a cool house track if you took out the dubstep and replaced it with different stuff