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VII

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    ollie

    about 8 months ago

    the intro is cool but the rest is a bit of a mess, no offence. There isnt any clear structure or phrasing, the mix is waaay unbalanced and everything is fighting for space, and the ideas down atm seem a bit random and unorganized. I get its a preview so its only an excerpt but this could be tidied up a fair bit. No hate, just crit :)

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      Perdition HIATUS (desc)

      about 8 months ago

      I have been fixing mixing for this and its a lot better as of now! Thanks for the feedback!

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      Perdition HIATUS (desc)

      about 8 months ago

      and yeah, i had messed with the levels for the drums for smthing and nvr fixed them..ooops

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      Perdition HIATUS (desc)

      about 8 months ago

      no i completely agree! im working on splitting the sub from the guitar and it has proven more difficult than expected

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