I'm going to expand this one.

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  • Expanded, and I believe better.

  • very meditative and nice work - if you want input i can give you subjective on this - leave it as it is - a nice meditative piece - or use it as a base for an instrumental maybe but i find it nice as it is :)

  • In my opinion it needs a low, bass beat with a lot of depth and some other strongly effected high sounds. Something like using the high-hats with heavy effects to give non-drum sounds. I use that a lot and get some nice sounds from it. It helps me minimize synth use.

  • Oh come on, I take anything, from critisim to what have you, I just need someone else's input on this.

  • I would love to help you but I don't think I should be giving advice like this. I can give opinions of finished tracks but not advice.

  • Any advice for this?