Has some potential. The bassline is pretty cool. If I would do a remix for the club. I'd make it 5 bpm faster and put some effort into the rhythm section. That single offbeat hihat is a little uninspired
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make it remixable and dowloadable
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I know this is house music but it's too repetitive. There's not enough variation in the arrangement or the composition to keep the listener interested. Look up some videos on syncopation, learn what it is, try implementing it. Syncopation is basically when two sounds are activating one after the other in a rhythmic way that fills the spaces in between the notes.
Like if you had a steady 4/4 beat with each beat on the first and third count, your syncopation would be on your second and 4th count
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Anytime!! I'm no pro so take what I say with a grain of salt. Music is very subjective and style can be different and it doesn't really have to follow any rules. But that's just my take, keep up the good work!
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yh,tysm le voile for ur feedback that i basically learned to add some variations to the song cuz its soooo repetitive.i agree with u in that and i try to do some variations in my tracks,because thats the only problem that i had.
in general thank you 🌹🌹🌹🌹
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In conclusion, great effort! I can see where you're going with the vibes, and you're headed in the right direction for sure. Just keep working on variating those rhythms and arrangements. I'm sure I don't need to tell you this but DeadMau5 is extremely talented at house music and has a lot of videos online that you can study. I'm sure that there are other House music artists that are just as good, I'm just not as familiar with them
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Add some fast drums and bass notes or sounds. Its has a good start just to simple. Listen to Good Looking Records for some ideas. Keep plugging away.
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It's ok, but imo it needs a more percussion changes, have potential
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its awesome
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nice flow! i like it
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cool
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very very cool g
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kind of generic, I see that a lot in true Dancehall or Disco, definitely get that feel here, I feel like there could be variety in the song, but I do like it overall, NICE JOB!
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I like this! The way everything goes together smoothly is amazing. Good job!
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i like it, it just feels a little empty to me. a little drawn out too. i also don't listen to house, so i don't know if those are conventions of house music.
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W track!
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i love it this is amazing work you got here
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which way was home again?
