Firstly thanks for saying hi Skyward, and you know what i wanted to comment your work saying stuff about the making track more complicated, but then i listened to your remix "DEfUSED-Another Year (skyward Remix)" and i know that you actually know that, i would say take this track [skrillex - with you, friends (half)] and go make it better, because you can do it.
You have the tune down or melody, now add some bass, snare and a hi-hat and your set. Otherwise I like it. The fact that you researched it and mimicked the sound yourself scores big points in my book. Now you feel my pain. I have the same tendency to create a love hate relation with all my finished works. Just watch, one bad comment from someone telling you it's not their thing will make you want to scrap it. Just hang in there. What you have is top notch so far.