That intro thou -For real thou
Pleave leave a comment. I welcome criticisim. Compared to my other works, I think it is exciting. Thanks and I hope you enjoy.
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This is amazing!
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nice!!
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NICE! really relaxing!
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It's okay for a first trackies. Trance are always a good start hehe, I started with trance here, too. It sounded worse.
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This is great! :D
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I know. No matte what I do I can never seem to get a good drum fill.
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its ok. u need to get better with the synths and use your own drum fills
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I don't think theres too much to criticize here. I really like this. I am extremely annoyed that the great arp lead in the 2nd half of the song is panned all the way left. Having the sound on one side completely for some reason makes my brain go crazy. All in all, amazing work. Maybe a percussive outro?
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You're on the good track with this!
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yes right. Sounds much fuller now. I prefer the slow part. greets
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to fix it you might need to make the frequency a little higher and maybe make the resonance spikes a little less extreme, but i'm no expert, so you might need to ask advice from someone more experienced, if this doesn't make it sound any better.
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this is really good, but i do have to say that it's painful to listen to in the first few seconds of the song, otherwise it is fine.
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Republished
After fixing some synth issues and putting in a good drum fill, I think I got something here.
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Thanks for the helps guys. As soon as i can i will get those changes in there and see where it'll go. I think i'll also change up the organization of it, like add a other verse and chorus and change the climax. The drum fill is definitely going to go. I think i'll replace the machiniste with a beatbox and add some effects to taste. Again, thanks for the criticism. I really liked the sound and want it to be
the gorgeous.
