I think it has a little too much going on at
0.38
, i dont know if thats what you were going on, maybe make that snare a tad louder and less repetitive,
I would use different toned 808 sub kicks ( if you get me ), you can do this by using the machiniste's pitch knob. The 2nd drop is alot better IMO.
2.14
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2.31
sounds really fitting, maybe add a sidechained White noise sample.