Okay, so first off, you need to boost the saws and layer them, also maybe add compression. Second, you should remove the sub on the saw bass and add a sine wave sub for a cleaner sound. Third, you should play around with automation and FX. It sounds dry, don't be scared to play with panning.
I'm a beginner trying to do EDM so take my opinion with a grain of salt, but I think it's pretty good. I'd definitely put it one of my playlists. Great job.