You make me jelly of how good you are<3
just for critique on how I was doing on my DnB.
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DAMN WHY DIDNT I KNO about you
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0:33 ahhhhh '
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very groovy i love it !
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Some edits like improving the drums and synths and creating a lead
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You could try putting a slight sidechan on the hat's to get some dynamics in them ;)
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Pretty nice man. Try to work on the synth sounds like said before. :) Cant say much more than already said.
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The drum fill is annoying
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Took out the Lead because I could find a good melody, and some other changes.
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I think JonJon brings up a good point: song structure really makes or break an awesome DnB track. My style demands motific subtle development, but DnB is somewhat an ever evolving track that changes color in your face with power and style! Having designation sections to introduce new ideas smoothly is great to have in your arsenal!
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I love this haha the low hi hat on your drumbeat is swell
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Not too sure how much critique i can give but I think the trebley synths sound too alike; as u get better at making synths (which took a lot of time for me and does for us all) I think the melodies will stand out more and it will be more crisp, also needs more bass &kick!
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This is pretty good!
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Nice.
