lol i was trying to make a mother mother type beat but then this came out

pls crit

i know i need to work on the ending of this

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Next given up into the storm its not like anyones coming to collect Mr anyway

I hate the chorus of this so much i am going to change it

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  • didnt know you sang damn

  • Huh I thought I faved this already

    • Maybe you were just destined to listen to it again lol

  • Everything works really well and I also enjoyed the lyrics. This is another hit for me mate.

  • Hi man , this track has potential. I like it a lot, it should be longer for me. Very good track

    • hmm thank you maybe i shall expand it