lyrics:
embers to the fire i've
kept for 7000 years
gradually diminish
--
what am i going
to become and should i be scared
is dying pure misfortune
--
it breaks us and it binds us
is this all perpetual
i've become the od old on
I feel like some EQing could really benefit this track. Basically anything that isn't a bass, cut somewhere from 140-500Hz. It'll help with some of the clipping issues, and give everything it's own space in the mix
Also when dealing with vocals, I'd cut anything under 300-400Hz. And make a notch at 7KHz (That's where the 'S' sounds is). Though, your vocals don't have any harsh 'S' sounds. The vocals could be a tad bit brighter as well (4KHz-10KHz)
The intro is clipping as well, but idk if that's the style of this track. It might be cool to have the pong/blip sound in the intro have some stereo width, that or ping pong pan it every now and then
onward is powerful~
I feel like some EQing could really benefit this track. Basically anything that isn't a bass, cut somewhere from 140-500Hz. It'll help with some of the clipping issues, and give everything it's own space in the mix
wow
that pad at is beautiful
stark contrast to the previous track, wow.
thanks
This is truly something else. Probably my favorite ambient works on AT.