please this needs contructive critisism .

there's still a lot of minor "errors" that need to be fixed.

Create an account or Login to write a comment.

  • User Avatar

    Mika___

    about 1 year ago

    Can I Tweak This A Bit And Have My Guy Rap Off Of This ....You'll Get Credit

  • User Avatar

    kill me

    about 3 years ago

    brooooooooooooooooooo

  • User Avatar

    opi

    about 3 years ago

    this track makes me feel at peace c: good title haha

  • User Avatar

    Xtraction

    about 3 years ago

    I liek

  • User Avatar

    Lil' Bassie*

    about 3 years ago

    the melody is awesome at 2:11 to 2:30 and the beat is on point the rest of the way after that holmes even then this thang is killin woot

  • User Avatar

    Lil' Bassie*

    about 3 years ago

    I am WOOTIN the WIP and the beat at 1:40 is off to a little all the way to 1:55

  • User Avatar

    Lil' Bassie*

    about 3 years ago

    hey the melody at 00:17 needs a litte deluning and the beats sounds off in the beginning bruh and the rest is great from my perspective bruh

  • User Avatar

    opi

    about 3 years ago

    this song makes me feel like (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

  • User Avatar

    lewi astro

    about 3 years ago
  • User Avatar

    [Khář¡]'

    about 3 years ago

    Something about those funky synths tho... Can't put my finger on it. They aren't bad but something is off to me. Honestly though, this song is still great though.

  • User Avatar

    [Khář¡]'

    about 3 years ago

    Lol those pads that come later are prefect... Whatever you do don't change those

  • User Avatar

    opi

    about 3 years ago

    this is so good already c:

  • User Avatar

    iso.

    about 3 years ago
  • User Avatar

    kim.

    about 3 years ago

    Those funky synths might a little tuning, but man this is great!

  • User Avatar

    Lil' Bassie*

    about 3 years ago

    Hey this is nice homie needs more delune at 00:24 at 00:37 it would be nice if you had a pitch green box there it adds more stuff to it bro this is nice man

00:00
06:03