WIP 1

Critique this please

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    NASSIV

    about 1 year ago

    dat snare xD

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    NASSIV

    about 1 year ago

    lmao its hard to hear what u gotta bang ur head to

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    Sky

    about 1 year ago

    This is cancerous

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    Sky

    about 1 year ago

    lol

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    Gray Out

    about 1 year ago

    more snare

    way more snare

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    3R3BU5(Collab comp)

    about 1 year ago

    This is an awesome song and all but I Have to agree with @Robo_Hero and @synthyyuuuuiuiuiu

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    Vulky uwu ( ͡ꈍ ͜ʖ̫ ͡ꈍ )

    about 1 year ago

    yeah it does feel a little too off. Songs can sound off and still sound insane, but urs was just a little too much. Its still sounds like candy tho

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    Doplay47

    about 1 year ago

    sounds pretty nice

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    synthy

    about 1 year ago

    all i can say is it just feels off, maybe its just me

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    hvd ☁ (gone)

    about 1 year ago

    check the snap grid man , only thing wrong is the beat pattern..thats really it

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    Sky

    about 1 year ago

    How could i fix tho?

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    synthy

    about 1 year ago

    ok then make the drums more enjoyable to listen to? it feels really stoppy-starty and doesnt go with the big smooth chords imho

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    Sky

    about 1 year ago

    Ok if sidechain hit the snare, this whole track would be ruined

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    hvd ☁ (gone)

    about 1 year ago

    seems like you tried to give it a shuffle that it really didn't need , thats why its off.

    The kicks are fine , I can understand those , but the snare is pretty off.. its ok , its just the snare hits too late.

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    Sky

    about 1 year ago

    what i am looking for is constructive critique

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