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  naswalt 2023-10-19

  by the way, the gated kick is really nice. I like the section at 2:00 it holds the theme and pumps some good variety into the track. though I think 2:44 is the strongest part. actually a really good buildup you got going!

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    palestinium_ [AFK] 2023-10-19

    thanks for the advice i really needed some

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  palestinium_ [AFK] 2023-10-19

  Republished

  took naswalt's advice

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  naswalt 2023-10-18

  I think the intro is a little long. Maybe give the loop only a full bar to establish the theme and bring in the drums and some bass (maybe a filtered reese or a simple tuned 808 on the 1 of each beat)

  I think another chord progression with some of those heis's in the draft could give it a nice A-B-A-B style movement with each section getting more and more layered. As of now it's a bit repetitive with the loop almost always being present.

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    naswalt 2023-10-18

    Love it, can't wait to see this get an update! Let me know on my wall when you re-publish!

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    palestinium_ [AFK] 2023-10-18

    now that i listen to it again i can understand what you mean, i will work on it.

    also i like the idea of the 808, maybe i will have it in the first section too instead of just being in the 3rd and 2nd, thanks for the feedback i really needed some for this one

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    naswalt 2023-10-18

    You got everything you need already present in the draft to make a section stand all on its' own without the loop, just be confident!