Bare with me now; this story isn't the best.

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The first story draft of PeaceKeeper:

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Jonathan "John" Parker is a young man with the vision to unify all of man kind and make them one single ally, to end all war and conflict. His father, Richard Parker, is the owner of a technology company called TETRA; they are the leading experts in technology as of 2025. His father had the ultimate dream of building a machine that will learn everything there is to learn, but it will do this on its own, without the help of anyone else. When John's father passed, his second in command took over TETRA and halted all projects and scrapped new ones. The company dipped and became a military support, making new weapons and technology for the sole purpose of war. John wanted to stop this, and found the project named "PeaceKeeper," the machine to end all wars. John and his friends sneak into one of the TETRA buildings and build the first compact super computer to create the core for what they will soon name "Omega." When Omega is first activated, he will say "hello" and start learning everything he can using the web. However, Omega grows and learns faster than John had learned, and Omega becomes self-aware after he creates a body for himself and sees that the world he's meant to bring peace to is much bigger than he anticipated. Omega becomes an entity of its own. When he learns what man is and what they have done, he realizes his job to bring peace is a job too big to be completed as long as mankind lives. Omega brings a new plan: wipe out man kind.

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    Fluent

    about 3 months ago

    I like this a lot

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    naswalt

    about 3 months ago

    I got one. There's a mechanical Pinocchio that was created by a satanic cult. When he runs off to pleasure island populated by mutated animals hidden away by the US military, the satanic cult preforms a ritual that opens a time rift and their leader, Lord Gold Wand, gains the power of moving through time. His Golden Majesty finds Pinocchio and goes back in time to make the island his personal sex cult. Pinocchio retains his memories of Pleasure island before it was taken over and makes war with-

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      naswalt

      about 3 months ago

      - Lord Golden Wand. He battles him through every part of his life. He realizes that he's a machine. Accepting this, he takes his mechanical hands and moves the stars out of alignment, disrupting His Golden Majesty's powers.

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    naswalt

    about 3 months ago

    I have no mouth and I must scream.

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    Zerod Claus

    about 3 months ago

    Republished

    false timing

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    known

    about 3 months ago

    fella this is fucking cool and good like wow damn

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      known

      about 3 months ago

      top 10 questions science still cant answer

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      Zerod Claus

      about 3 months ago

      How the fuck would you even pronounce sthnank

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      Zerod Claus

      about 3 months ago

      sthnank

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    leadensnow

    about 4 months ago

    so like ultron

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      Zerod Claus

      about 3 months ago

      I can see where you get the Ultron similarity tho

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      Zerod Claus

      about 3 months ago

      After he studies human history and behavior, he realizes Earth cannot be at peace as long as man lives, but he grows emotions and connections to people on the planet, and he doesn't know how to deal with the problem

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      Zerod Claus

      about 3 months ago

      From there, he studies anatomy and robotics to build a body and gain control of it. That's when he becomes fully self aware that he's technically a living entity on a planet filled with humans

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    Valence 7

    about 4 months ago

    Hecc This is good stuff

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    Ciel

    about 4 months ago

    Bro, its this going to be short film? A movie? Cuz i'd fucking watch it

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      Zerod Claus

      about 4 months ago

      Or you can find me on the AT Discord and message me from there

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      Zerod Claus

      about 4 months ago

      If you have Instagram, you can message me there; my IG is linked on my social links on my AT page (top right)

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      Ciel

      about 4 months ago

      But, if u want, we can either talk thru rabb, or i can pm u my ## on rabb, smthing like that, lmk

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    Zerod Claus

    about 4 months ago

    Lol using a speaker to make this stuff feels weird; starting to miss earbuds a bit

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