aight so
the producer tag in the beginning sounds HELLA weird, the vocals are off, are too loud at some points, and are also clipping, the synth at doesn't seem to fit well (the notes could be better), some of the crashes have weird placing in the track, and it seems like the track is just all chorus and then an outro. I don't mean to completely shit on ur track but, tbh, there's a lot of work to be done here.
this old @god__moosey
oh dawm im late asf
https://www.audiotool.com/track/gy2t4fchw/ . this is zayuhs beat ballin
wow i wish i could rap like you
aight so the producer tag in the beginning sounds HELLA weird, the vocals are off, are too loud at some points, and are also clipping, the synth at doesn't seem to fit well (the notes could be better), some of the crashes have weird placing in the track, and it seems like the track is just all chorus and then an outro. I don't mean to completely shit on ur track but, tbh, there's a lot of work to be done here.