11th grader (wip)

Lewi Astro (@ssurrealboy)
918 Sep 1, 16 Other
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i need a stronger computer omg. please tell me what i could work on to make this better. (constructive criticism please)

         
vmv666
vmv666 Dec 3, 16

I fw this hard

Jon Jon
Jon Jon Oct 8, 16

Rolling up a J listening to this. I ain't even smoked yet and I feel high. It's your music bruh. It too good.

burg
burg Sep 29, 16

you're already an audiotool god, you've won

Only Human
Only Human Sep 28, 16

Why did this not chart?

Lewi Astro (@ssurrealboy)

okay, thank you guys for the feedback btw. i just don't like overworking on a song and finding out its garbage to my expectations.

Nion
Nion Sep 5, 16

I need a new computer as well. The kick can have a little more bump to it.

drew White Medium Star on

Tbh i dont really like the vocal chops around because i feel it takes away from the overall effect. Hope this helps you

Ari.
Ari. Sep 2, 16

im in 10th tho :p

neek
neek Sep 2, 16

damn dope