11th grader (wip)

Lewi Astro (@ssurrealboy)
918 Sep 1, 16 Other
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i need a stronger computer omg. please tell me what i could work on to make this better. (constructive criticism please)

         
Jun 8, 17

how did you do the vocals

Dec 3, 16

I fw this hard

Oct 8, 16

Rolling up a J listening to this. I ain't even smoked yet and I feel high. It's your music bruh. It too good.

Sep 29, 16

you're already an audiotool god, you've won

Sep 28, 16

Why did this not chart?

Sep 5, 16

okay, thank you guys for the feedback btw. i just don't like overworking on a song and finding out its garbage to my expectations.

Sep 5, 16

I need a new computer as well. The kick can have a little more bump to it.

Sep 4, 16

The vocal chops everywhere else tho is good :)

Sep 4, 16

Tbh i dont really like the vocal chops around because i feel it takes away from the overall effect. Hope this helps you

Sep 2, 16

this is sooo pretttyyyy <3

Sep 2, 16

i may completely redo this

Sep 2, 16

im in 10th tho :p

Sep 2, 16

THERE WE GO!

Sep 2, 16

damn dope

republished
Sep 2, 16

music is hard...

republished
Sep 1, 16

i'm tired man... further adjustments tomorrow

Sep 1, 16

@danielbeatz yeah i think i'm gonna hit up a reverb for that snare