I'm vibing with it. Reminds me of some of the throat singing stuff I've been listening to.
So atmospheric, but entrancing.
....uh oh. Caaaaaan't say i love those screaming vocals tho, that really took me out of it. I get the desire for contrast, so maybe it just needs some work
Nevertheless, cool stuff. I think most of the atmosphere and vocal humming was probably done by skybound zoo, correct me if I'm wrong. It's just what I'm really vibing with
i think the screaming's cool but bc of the type of screaming it is you might wanna mix it a little differently than the rest of the vocals to give it extra grit bc they sound a bit too restrained, esp in the first few verses where you waver in and out of regular raps and like half-scream raps. either needs a little distortion or try to like project your voice more so it sounds less shy. and maybe like literally open your mouth more as youre screaming bc it sounds like your lips are smushed