Hello guys, this is the first track I publish, listen to the music, comment on it and I hope you like the music, constructive criticism is always welcome in the comments. you are reading what I wrote, enjoy the song, if you want to remix this track, feel free to express your creativity the way you want, however, you should quote me your remix, put the credits for me to produce the first version of this track or [REMIX COMP], enjoy

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    乙卂Ҝ丨 匚卄丨ㄥㄥㄖㄩㄒ-Tokyo Gems-

    1 week ago

    this is dope good job

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    SOLACE

    2 weeks ago

    Very bubbly and pretty! great job dude

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    Chris The Chemist

    2 weeks ago

    I think this sounds super good man, almost too good.. Are you sure you are "New" to audiotool???

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      KHIONE

      2 weeks ago

      in fact, i'm new to a fixed account at audiotool, i use audiotool for about 4 years, but it wasn't 4 years after using it at audiotool, there were spaces, i used audiotool once there after 2 months, 6 months or 1 year I used it again, but this year I'm using audiotool directly, like this year, every day I enter the audiotool

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    Astrel stays en casa

    2 weeks ago

    Hey. Thanks for the comments on my wall. As for this song, I’m impressed. I almost don’t believe that this is your first song lol. It is quite good. The arp is good. The mixing is good (better than mine lol). The vibe is cool. The bass is simple which I like. Just a few things for criticism. I’d like to see this as a longer song. It felt kinda rushed. Also, the high frequencies in this song are wayyyy too loud. Maybe try putting a quantum multiband compressed right after the centroid and turn -

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      Astrel stays en casa

      2 weeks ago

      - down everything past about 10000 hz. I think it could do with some fills. And some things build up to nothing. It’s kinda unsatisfying for the listener when something builds to nothing. I’d also recommend some variation. It just felt quite redundant. But hey for ur first song. Not bad. Heck u already made a song onto the house leaderboard. That’s something I’ve been attempting for about a year now and u did it first try lol. Yeah. Overall not bad but it could definitely use a bit of work. :)

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    octane

    2 weeks ago

    quite a nice idea, agree w/ @Goon , the lows are very drowned out compared to the rest

    try using the quantum tool on the master, but the track is very nice

    it's also kinda short, maybe try and make it a bit longer

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    KHIONE

    2 weeks ago

    Republished

    Not Remix This Track

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    ▽Vermont✨▽

    2 weeks ago

    Nice bro keep it up!

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      KHIONE

      2 weeks ago

      thanks, bro, are you 13 years old ?, Hmm, some of your songs are interesting, mainly funky town, very cool, keep practicing on your songs, can you do something interesting on audiotool or outside audiotool on other music programs, soon you will have visibility and make great collaborations, all in your time

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    KHIONE

    2 weeks ago

    Republished

    Another Edit v14

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    KHIONE

    3 weeks ago

    Republished

    mixing

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    KHIONE

    3 weeks ago

    Republished

    Music in 100 Hz

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    almate

    3 weeks ago

    Do you have previous experience? It sounds like you know how to structure a song. All i gotta say is just work on the mixing a little and you'll be good. Make sure the master track around 50 hz is "warm" rather than too "boomy" and 100 hz should be the driving "thump" of the bass in theory but not overpowering the whole mix. 500 hz should "crunch" but not sound boxy either (this is where most sounds collide about). 1000 hz should sound clear, but not harsh. 10,000 hz should feel like light air

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      KHIONE

      3 weeks ago

      I do not understand this part of frequency very much, I will study too, I will spend a period not posting music very often, so that in the near future I can post high quality music and with all the correct frequencies and that people have fun, and if you want help me, I don't know, create a project for a song and invite me and tell me how this heartz part works, but because of that I will focus a lot on what you wrote

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    Fluent

    3 weeks ago

    You've got the sounds you need here. I'd recommend double checking the key you are in because some of your sounds are not in the same one. (major issues starting at 00:18 ) Also you have some parts that build up into nothing really, even though they seem like they are headed to something else. (granted this is only 45 seconds) I'd definitely be curious to see what you do with this!

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      KHIONE

      3 weeks ago

      I edited the song now, listen to how it looks now

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    KHIONE

    3 weeks ago

    Republished

    Another Edit v13

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    Goon

    3 weeks ago

    Thanks for your message :) I agree with the comments about the loudness, the lows are drowned out, but there are really nice touches in this, especially your automation. If you're also aiming for a 90s vibe, I wouldn't boost so many high frequencies, I tend to leave my mixes more mid heavy for a less clinical sound. You could use the tube drive or exciter, in a gentle way, to bring out a few more highs, and add colour that way instead. I hope that's the kind of advice you had in mind!

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      Goon

      3 weeks ago

      Oh definitely, sounds more alive!

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      KHIONE

      3 weeks ago

      I turn the music down, listen to how it turned out, did it get better? ;)

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    KHIONE

    3 weeks ago

    Republished

    decreases the volume of the music v2

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