How to Camellia [wip]

@elow
342 Jan 18, 25 EDM
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https://www.audiotool.com/track/h217d7s0a3j/ origional https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BJ9z3P2MGR8&t=379s best video to learn from my first huge project on the new pc it runs audiotool very smoothly

         
Mar 12, 25

growls in the buildup dont really fit either

Mar 12, 25

mixed is kinda fucked

Mar 12, 25

Your growls that you added in the buildup are also extremely messy in the mids, mid highs, and ear piercing on the highs. Try to not overcomplicate the sound design for them, as that'll lead to a messier sound. They also do not flow very well, and the glitch/growl artifacts right before the drop doesn't fit in rhythm, or sound design. You want all your sounds to compliment each other, not sound out of place. The end goal for a track/song is for it to sound like it's one singular sound

Mar 12, 25

Manually sidechaining is tedious, but it's always going to be cleaner than sidechain compression. Also if you need, there's a few websites for converting ms (for attack/release on the gravity), to bpm. And the drums are lack luster in the sense that they aren't really upfront. Mid/side eq will also benefit some sounds. Another thing I can add is that your drum selection is awkward. The kick is too dispersed, and has a weird transient, with a horrible body. In terms making them lack luster

Mar 12, 25

ahh I understand

Mar 12, 25

I looked into the project, you have a lot of unnecessary lows and lowmids cluttering the sub frequencies (saws, leads, arps, etc), and your cinematic impacts don't fit, yk, the really tonal ones. Try keeping everything as dry as possible, then add reverb and such to sounds if wanted. When you try to keep a dry mix, it leaves room for adding cool sparkly sounds, and reverb, and delay. The sidechain is also too much, you're better off using volume automation, with how fast the drums get imo

Mar 12, 25

yeah its really weird

Mar 12, 25

its mainly the drums and intro

Mar 12, 25

most definitely agree I'm not going to fix it so remix should be open

Jan 30, 25

Audiotool really needs to fix their electronic dance music genre. I don't know how anyone can dance to this unless they're on massive amounts of cocaine.

Jan 21, 25

dude this is so good

Jan 18, 25

Sounds similar to Cametek. Should’ve thrown in a few more growl fills.

Jan 18, 25

yeah i was thinking so

Jan 18, 25

As a rhythm gamer, I can approve lol.

Jan 18, 25

much better

Jan 18, 25

its going to give me healing loss but its fire

Jan 18, 25

its way to loud

Jan 18, 25

hopefully now i cant tell how loud my stuff is rn

Jan 18, 25

@theclient ik the mix could use work but other then that is it decent?