vocals in the track, didn't know whether to use them or not

played all the guitars and basses and whatnot

first song where most of it was recorded, really fun experience

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lyrics:

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you tell me these stories about my friends

(and it hurts me)

you tell me the story of who I am

(who I used to be)

and irregular stranger stares at me

(and he hates me)

He told me so the other day

(it's ok, its just another...)

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(chorus) x4

phase

just a phase

a phase

its just another

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you told me you loved me the other day

(was that fake?)

you told me it's ok, it's all fine

(what a lie)

you're such a stranger now to me

(and you hate me)

I'm getting dizzy in my head

(am I dead?! cause this is a)

.

phase

just a phase

a phase

it's just another

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  • Reminds me a lot of UNDERTALE but more in the DELTARUNE universe!

  • a vibe for sure

    I'd suggest slightly altering the velocities of some of the kicks to give it a more natural feel, but other than that, nothing else to really say.

    Excited to hear what it'll sound like with vocals

    • graci! :DDDD

      will do something about the kicks

  • I love the synth bass so much! I'd give it a little movement on the filter env and make the fist strike a little brighter than the rest (kinda like how a picked bass might be played by a player)

    Then I'd just slap on some chorus and reverb to the chords/melody to taste and you got a fucking hit, man!

  • this fire

  • i love it!!!

  • i can friggin hear the lyrics even when they arent there

    you know you've definitely succeeded in a song you have yet to add vocals to when i can easily imagine the lyrics being slapped onto the song :>>

  • I'd love to hear this with your vocals. I' like to do a rough mix to smooth it out.

  • Very nice

  • slay