I don't mind the drums. They give me a Kraftwerk vibe.
Sep 29, 19
I get what you're going for but as the others said the drum kit doesn't fit the feel at all. Also the drum pattern itself is insanely robotic. Theres no groove or swing or humanization. I remember giving similar crit a while back; don't wanna be rude but if this is the style you're going for you have to learn to make drums sound a bit more realistic :)
Sep 29, 19
I agree with NWA that a more lo-fi drum kit could work better, love that main synth though. This would be awesome with vocals.
Sep 29, 19
Yo this is has a great feel! I love the way the chord prog changes in intensity throughout the track.
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However, the natural drum kit might not be a good fit. I like the position of all the perc sounds, but it feels like there could be more fitting for lofi if you used some distort/warped synthetic drums.
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Again, great moodyness and composing <3
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I don't mind the drums. They give me a Kraftwerk vibe.
I get what you're going for but as the others said the drum kit doesn't fit the feel at all. Also the drum pattern itself is insanely robotic. Theres no groove or swing or humanization. I remember giving similar crit a while back; don't wanna be rude but if this is the style you're going for you have to learn to make drums sound a bit more realistic :)
I agree with NWA that a more lo-fi drum kit could work better, love that main synth though. This would be awesome with vocals.
Yo this is has a great feel! I love the way the chord prog changes in intensity throughout the track. . However, the natural drum kit might not be a good fit. I like the position of all the perc sounds, but it feels like there could be more fitting for lofi if you used some distort/warped synthetic drums. . Again, great moodyness and composing <3
I like the chord progession
chill
real nice