So I think the chords are overflowing the middle mix, not allowing the 808 to prominently sing its tune. Also think some extra melodies and rework in various parts to make the song less repetitive.
Extra drum work and percs also would be of good quality in here.
The complementary counter-melody at
01:00
could stick out a bit more, honestly could probably do well in a different timbre, or an octave higher. The placement isn't necessarily bad, but it needs more breathing room. Imo the kicks do not need to be that loud. Overall the track mixing is very dense in a narrow space. I like myself a more low-passed sound, but the elements could be a bit clearer if you put them into the high-end more (clap, pads and such) (1)