YO THERES NO WAY THIS IS #1
go checc the original beat I made! (beat for this btw)
i need you
i need you
i need you
i need your love right now
oh
yeah
call you my love
but I end up lovestruck
guess I just, fell for you
guess I ran, out of luck
you chose another nigga
and I had no love
what are we gonna do when push comes to shove
I gotta keep it real I shouldn't have spent band on you
we shoulda kept it real and just went through
I called you my baby and took you out to dinner
but now you playin games and there ain't gon be no winner
I just mixed up lean with sum percocets
I tried to stay cleaned when I had it best
you cant keep lying, yeah, cant attest
yeah got all these diamonds up on my neck
rocking sum balenci mix it with the rick
you keep playing games and its finna make me sick
niggas keep on talking til they see the blick
its all fun and ames until u gon hear a click
i need you
i need you
i need you
i need your love right now
oh
yeah
call you my love
but I end up lovestruck
guess I just, fell for you
guess I ran, out of luck
you chose another nigga
and I had no love
what are we gonna do when push comes to shove
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bet if i dropped the beat for it itll chart
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the lead is poking my ear and the vocals are stabbing it. baseline is super nice tho and i like the chords
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pretty good, only suggestion would be better mixing. I would try to put the vocals in front of the beat, not behind it. so basically if the vocals are the main instrument they should be the loudest. that's what I and most others would do, but if you like the vocals to be more quiet, keep doing it; don't feel like you have to change your style
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Making your own beat and rapping on it is crazyy on audiotool
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alr its off to spotify now
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peak mumble rapping rh
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get yo paper up and get anteres
i like this tho + the vocals
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i feel like theres there's just too much happening at the same time at certain points.
Also, some of the chords that have that gritty effect might need to be turned down a little bit, I listened to it with AirPods so I don't know how valid my input is in the vocals are kind of just mashed in with the beat when it needs to be blended I don't think the volume of the vocals is the problem.
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ur vocals need to be louder and sit on top of ur beat but not to much u gotta blend it
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yoooo dis is FIRE🔥🔥🔥
