Overall, this song sounds great so far! But it's a shame you have to publish it just to get some help. Next time, I might suggest asking someone on their wall to be invited and offer feedback, so that you don't have to publish and miss out on a good reception from your audience
when the vocal sample comes in at it's too loud and sudden. You need a crescendo or some sort of gentle build. I'd say that's the problem with much of this track. It's very loud right now, and that will be handled later in mixing and mastering, but much of your transitions are very abrupt and harsh. And there's no real intro or outro yet (I know those are not where you are most adept, but just trying to help by pointing it out).
whoa that vocal sample lol
where is that from? it sounds familiar...
when it drops at I feel like the song wants to get more intense but then it drops drastically. you need to reconcile this
it's tough to tell because it's another 2 genre track.
if you want to combine black and white (or something else that is contrasting) then you need to stitch them together carefully, because they are like 2 magnets of the same polarity. They will not attract, but they can compliment very wonderfully if applied with care and grace
i did and i'm following you yay
your songs are good
how do i follow you
good
I'mthinking to make only the last genre on this draft. . . What you think about?
Beauti job
Katia,Katerina,Katiusha :)
Overall, this song sounds great so far! But it's a shame you have to publish it just to get some help. Next time, I might suggest asking someone on their wall to be invited and offer feedback, so that you don't have to publish and miss out on a good reception from your audience
when the vocal sample comes in at it's too loud and sudden. You need a crescendo or some sort of gentle build. I'd say that's the problem with much of this track. It's very loud right now, and that will be handled later in mixing and mastering, but much of your transitions are very abrupt and harsh. And there's no real intro or outro yet (I know those are not where you are most adept, but just trying to help by pointing it out).
whoa that vocal sample lol where is that from? it sounds familiar... when it drops at I feel like the song wants to get more intense but then it drops drastically. you need to reconcile this
Oh, and what genre is this?