So me personally:
I'd noticeably change up the song because it's too repetitive (Like @unicornfluffy09 mentioned)
Make sure the 808s are in tune and loud enough
Add some more elements to the track. (Arps, melodies, chords, etc.)
I get that it's only been a month and you're new around here but try to refrain from using too many samples in a track without anything else.
Feb 10, 23
Oh yea and the (closed hi) hat pattern in the end sounds a bit off.
That's all I have to say.
So me personally: I'd noticeably change up the song because it's too repetitive (Like @unicornfluffy09 mentioned) Make sure the 808s are in tune and loud enough Add some more elements to the track. (Arps, melodies, chords, etc.) I get that it's only been a month and you're new around here but try to refrain from using too many samples in a track without anything else.