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Created 10/14/18
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fills and transitions, you perfected the reverb on your open hats and background percs, better than any shit i've could've done. okay your negro, done ! :))
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it's never a dull moment in this track, so for this conclusion, you have the leveling right, your mixing and mastering, kinda needs more tuning, but i've listened to this about more than 8 times to understand, so my ears are use to all the nice raw surprises you had for me. I would try to work some more hat magic, I'm not saying get exotic, start switching the pitches for this, get crazy basically. And, what else? Yeah, The pad in the background is GREAT, and I think that's all, you got amazing
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with this track, i would try added some minor chords and panning them from left to right, for the full 3d effect, you know what i'm saying? i wouldn't say making them loud, but the gain them down until it's there, but at the same time faint. Let's go back to the main chord and that saw
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Okay well I'm not one to talk 'cause my music is T R A S H, but you wanted harsh crit, so please don't hate me :( Okay, so first I'm just going to tell you how I would've done it because it seems like this whole concept of this track is dream-like. So in order to achieve this goal, i would've probably picked a different sound as the main sound. (whew!) This main sound, imma call it a lead, is unique, but doesn't fit the aesthetic I think your going for. let me continue --
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Okay so maybe your dream-like track needs to have the saw, I don't think I would add the saw at 00:32 but I get you have the compressed kick early, I don't know, that's all you. I would save the saw for the surprise 1:06 , it would be a nice surprise, the bass is perfect btw. No comment there. But your main lead, kinda needs more reverb. Wait, no, it DOES need more reverb. Atleast your not like me and your constantly repubbing because your making mistakes, LOL, i'm such a klutz. Back 2 the review
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Okay, the drums are in the background, I think it's the kicks that are sound like being shuffled, not the compressed ones, those are amazeballs. You have a nice piano koto sound like, that needs more reverb. I don't think you should crush the piano koto stab/pluck part, that's just heavenly. I don't know if you did this, because I don't have headphones on, but you need the stereo enhancer and then inverse, ONLY if you think about using the crusher, and if you wanted to sound more realistic ....
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Let me just tell you 1:06 is amazing, from the compression to how that unique lead actually fits in with everything in the song. But I do believe you should start off this song with a different sound and I would recommend using crusher. Crush all the cords, maybe even the bass, definitely not the drums, until you hear a nice dog whistle sound. If you do that, you'll hear the different type of frequencies that would make it sound dreamy. In my suggestion, yikes
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I would like to know what any artist here don't like about this track or some good harsh crit. fr fr.
Please.. . .. (*-*)
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<3 i love the bass man
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this is fucking great
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this has a really nostalgic vibe to it and i love it
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aye!
this slaps
