Fuck now I can finally remake this how I wanted <3
BIG CHORDS!!!!!
The biggest song I've ever worked on.
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Spectacular!
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chords so far are good, your desc. is living up to expectations
Oohhh my that sub rocks my $20 Skull Candy earpods :)
I like the drop!! Chords sound super good, this has good atmosphere which I'm a fan of.
That second cooldown/build up I like more than the first, thank you for changin it up from the first
Oooh I really like the arp in the second chorus
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earpods eh? I'm sorry I thought I replied to your comment here but ended up being I didn't ;-;
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Something about that first break and bass seems off, I'm not sure if its not enough highs, or loud enough but i feel something
The second bass that comes in sounds better, which is weird idk maybe im just hearing it weirdly lmao don't sweat it too much.
I really like the outro, I always thought a simple melody with the chords rising in suspense is a great ending.
Great track man!!
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Hm the high arp is familiar, gives me xavi vibes lel. Some of the bass notes in the second drop sound a little weird. I especially like those first two bars of the first drop when there are no drums and the synths open up and scream.
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More Mastering
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intro is super pretty. the sub sounds like it's out of tune when it comes in? check that out. the mixing leading up to the drop is a bit awkward. the drop clips really hard and has too many lows. the sidechaining is also weird, the release is a bit too high for me. eq your snare, it's too thick in the low mids and doesn't have enough high end punch (continued)
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it really helps to have each synth take up its own space frequency-wise. your issue rn is that a lot of your synths are mid/low mid heavy while you don't have enough highs. having fewer synths adding to your mids will help with that "pop" you're looking for a lot
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I see what you mean. I completely forgot I put in a riser. I have a hard time spacing synths out soundwise to make them pop
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always happy to give crit my dude, glad to see you're looking to improve
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turned on intro bass. Accidentally had it off
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Completely fixed chords and changed the bass slightly and added more dubstep properties.
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The kick definitely needs a more noticable punch in the drop. Note to self: clean up chordwork and edit some synths. Raise volume slightly.
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sounds like a light lfo on the cutoff would be nice on the second drop but thats just the fb artist in me
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Fixed bass loudness and added cover photo
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ooh me like that synth in the beginning
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this is really dope, its too quiet and need a mid bass, but still super dope
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added growls and mastering.
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woo FInished
