I had a whole half-comprehensive list of things I wanted to say about this that might help but I think it might have been too much to just... dump all over you so I'll cut it VERY short while still tryin to help you out
omfds you're amazing for this advice thank you so much
i do wanna say that i went off random chords that sounded alright, i had nothing in mind i just added what i thought sounded good, i did think about starting the song where a some of the instruments were already introduced, but for the sake of length i didn't
but again thanks so much i appreaciate it more than anything!!
ig you couldve had that arp change with the chords but otherwise cool i think youll get better this stuff just takes time trust me i would know it's taken me 11 years and my stuff is still mid
yeah i usually get that feeling right after i publish a submission for a song challenge like i felt that way after those two 808 challenge songs but a lot more with the second one (i still dont like that one tbh)
you know that feeling when you listen back on your song after like a few hours and realize how actually bad it is, that's what im getting from here lmao