pretty offkey in some parts, lacks a lot, basic

enjoy tho

p.s snapshot is a T cool right

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  • I had a whole half-comprehensive list of things I wanted to say about this that might help but I think it might have been too much to just... dump all over you so I'll cut it VERY short while still tryin to help you out

    • nono i appreciate criticism a lot when it comes to music

    • Yes this is still future bass haha 😁 also you're VERY welcome! I hope nothing was too harsh!

    • omfds you're amazing for this advice thank you so much

      i do wanna say that i went off random chords that sounded alright, i had nothing in mind i just added what i thought sounded good, i did think about starting the song where a some of the instruments were already introduced, but for the sake of length i didn't

      but again thanks so much i appreaciate it more than anything!!

      p.s is this future bass? im not even sure lmao

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  • yo no way this charted i didnt even realize😭

  • love that sudden Fm7 before the Em7 at the end

    • appreciate it soso much 🙏 ill keep these in mind

    • honestly, imo, I wouldn't change anything, but I would add some extra instruments like more drums, sub bass or maybe an arp

  • ig you couldve had that arp change with the chords but otherwise cool i think youll get better this stuff just takes time trust me i would know it's taken me 11 years and my stuff is still mid

    • yeah i usually get that feeling right after i publish a submission for a song challenge like i felt that way after those two 808 challenge songs but a lot more with the second one (i still dont like that one tbh)

    • you know that feeling when you listen back on your song after like a few hours and realize how actually bad it is, that's what im getting from here lmao

    • gotcha man really appreciate it🙏

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  • too much clashing in the low end

    • i was probably too lazy to automate the the eq during the buildup i see what you mean

    • but i kinda like the drop, reminds me of vixxe's stuff

  • feels like a cafe game intro soundtrack, i like it lol