My little submission to AT day 2013, hope you enjoy!

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  • wow

  • tks @Jacob Tyler , I get better ! It's all about me: I read competition has to be noticed in the description once contest is over...

  • don't worry i had seen this;) great synth work btw;)

  • @Kamaro ahhh here is a good and honnest comment, tks for this, that's what to improve and get better :)

    but yes, you are an asshole!..... ;)

  • I'm sorry for being an asshole :)

  • Ok, you wanted comment so you got it. For me there is too many different things playing in the same time, some of them don't fit when played togather, and it's a bit too loud. Some said me "if you can see white square on your waveform, then bring volume down"

  • Republished

    new version with new final. tks for your comments that helped

  • in terms of structure? surely!! :)

    I let my mind go on this track without thinking to any composition rules...

  • So different... WOW!!

  • I love this. Pointers, shorten the intro. Cut the flute. Add the body of the song a second go around and shorten the ending. Meat and potatoes is what we want. Excellent work here.

  • Advices well noted Mr. @ATHeat !

    I will definitly work on a new version till end of the WE.

    Tks for words and follow!

  • And even double tks, because as far as I remind, the bass was made with one of your pulv setting, adapted to my requirements but directly linked to yours :)

  • Tks @·· A w a k e n s ·· ! Actually, I was wondering if the glides, that are expected (I made a sample of the puv/glided melody than added i to the loop) really feets , and also if drums would not be good directly at the beginning.. :) you reads my mind perfectly. Will see till december 9th!

    As for starting the bass earlier, definitly not: I like when the progression is slowly made.

    Anyway tks for your valuabel comment :) !!

  • When the bass starts is like... OMG xD.. Really good job dude but, i would get rid the glide and i would starts early the bass and at first i will put dnb drums ... but as you like. Anyway good job!

  • Merci Mlle @islyz ! Je l'ai faite avec un casque et c'est LE problème: elle rend bien au casque, mais je la trouve très flat sans...

    Merci bien en tout cas, j'apprécie!