Awake (House)

usidaflop
381 Dec 21, 12 Other
0:00 / 3:44
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Not my usual sound, but it was fun to make. I'd really appreciate any feedback since I'm new to the genre. Thanks: edit: boosted vocals and bass edit: shortened intro Vocals from: http://www.freesound.org/people/robgrace/sounds/108329/

         
Deth_Meth
Dec 22, 12

Sounds better xD You didnt have to shorten the intro but it did make an impact for me

ollie
Dec 22, 12

I love this man! That lead glidey synth is great! At :31, maybe add a synth that packs a hard mid-bass. That'd fill the track out a bit? :)

abstract
Dec 22, 12

love how you end it, use that white noise more, believe me, it sounds GREAT

abstract
Dec 22, 12

interesting lead, and the compressed bass is gold :) need sum middle register, i'd suggest some pad progression

Sprike
Dec 22, 12

Great job !!

Dei Servus
Dec 21, 12

love the bass that you slowly put in here. @1:05!!!!!!! LOVRE THAT SYNTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! really awesome stuff!!! amazing stuff!!!!!

Deth_Meth
Dec 21, 12

I like it, just sounds a bit weird to me. I'm used to more quicker songs that jump into the good stuff around 20 seconds or less. Good Job none theless.

usidaflop
Dec 21, 12

Still a rough draft. Anybody wanna give me some tips? :)