SELCIVS: It was really cool working with @killer wolf (prod) SR . I've never made a song with a rapper before and had tons of fun working with the vocals.

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  • The instrumental itself is decent but it gets ruined by the vocals. The Rapper's delivery is kind of monotone and unenthusiastic. The lyrics don't have to be wordsmith worthy but they could've been written better. Also the vocals don't sound like they were being mixed right I think either a dynamic mic or condenser mic might help with this. Also this is minor but I wish the rapper would've changed up their flow. I am not trying to sound rude but I wanted to critique.

    • All fair.

      This was my first attempt with working with lyrics so I'm sure there were things I could have done better mix wise. I think I would have wanted the vocals to sound cleaner.

      Lyrically I think a different theme would have been better with the instrumental

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  • Republished

    Updated mix and made it more dynamic

  • Republished

    Decreased sub and added new synths

  • ooh cool