After getting over my mini writers block I came up with this great Idea. This was all made in the same day. took a few hours so excuse the many mistakes (cause I know there are alot.) This song was a mix between something emotional, hard, and cool-feeling so this is a fittting title.
Now wait! before you start skipping though the song wait throuigh it cause there are many cool parts, especially the end!!
btw(No samples ore oneshots used except loopmasters) comment and critisize one what could be better (cause theres alot) and tell me whhat you think
Enjoy!! :))
had to come back to this :) that synth hits hard, great use of the 909 ( i think?) got some great drum sounds out of it. i think the organ part sounds all right even though the tonality changes. note at 2.48 is a little sketchy
I dont know it would sound really boring in the same chord I would think. but good feedback!! Thanks for your large comments you all ;) I enjoy getting a taste of my own medicine(for lack of a better metaphoric phrase) :P Thank you all amazing artists!!
OOH this is COOL!!! i really like the beginning synth. yeah, at that synth is a bit weird. maybe you could have a muffled, pluck synth with some delay and reverb on it w/ barely any sustain bouncing off of some c to g fifths. but that synth works after, though, at around . just by itself its a bit strange. and just keep the whole thing in c minor at , that doesnt work. otherwise, this is great! awesome work! :)
Yes, he takes it to a major tonality briefly between and .. of course our ears are being trained that it should have minor tonality in this section, so I guess it's what you make. But you are right, consistency would be nice :p
Haha well actually its a minor 1 to a minor 5 which a stupid progression and very different. But later its c-c-g 1st inv-g 2nd inv... so its sounding weird yes hahA thst synth at a stRt is agredx a little annoying but later when i add the lowere octVe to it i think it sounds alot better to me. But thanks you!!
For criticism the synth at 27 seconds feels kind of off, that's probably on purpose but personally I don't like the sound very much. I really like the deep, subtle bass, als good use of the rassel. The break has some very odd chords in it, idk if they're right for this type of style. The perc is very nice, good job :)
If your talking about the pad its a preset of my own modified its core sound and lfoed a few voices different but still all my synths requires much trial and error. And thank you joel i recognized my skill at making them. I put quite a bit of work on the perc but it still wasnt all i wanted and excpected it to be still.
Seeing all these miatakes again makes me wanna come back and fix them.... shouldve waited longer...
true that haha very packed
yeah, but it still haz great potential, such a packed song :)
Yeah i atill cant beleive i missed that hahHa but its already 5 mins youd think its too long already
i think you should extend the song a little because the end would sound great if you progressed with triplets, maybe make a third drop
had to come back to this :) that synth hits hard, great use of the 909 ( i think?) got some great drum sounds out of it. i think the organ part sounds all right even though the tonality changes. note at 2.48 is a little sketchy
nice sound man i dig it :)
its nt really dubstep really just electro I think. but definently not dubstep. but thanks for answering!!
It's good, I'm just not really a fan of this type of Dubstep :/
I dont know it would sound really boring in the same chord I would think. but good feedback!! Thanks for your large comments you all ;) I enjoy getting a taste of my own medicine(for lack of a better metaphoric phrase) :P Thank you all amazing artists!!
OOH this is COOL!!! i really like the beginning synth. yeah, at that synth is a bit weird. maybe you could have a muffled, pluck synth with some delay and reverb on it w/ barely any sustain bouncing off of some c to g fifths. but that synth works after, though, at around . just by itself its a bit strange. and just keep the whole thing in c minor at , that doesnt work. otherwise, this is great! awesome work! :)
oh I hear it now. Im surprised I didnt see that. thanks!!
I think i know what your talking about but yeah i thought i missed sone notes. Like i said, many small probs. But thank you!!
Yes, he takes it to a major tonality briefly between and .. of course our ears are being trained that it should have minor tonality in this section, so I guess it's what you make. But you are right, consistency would be nice :p
The organ emulation's notes at and . The highest note in both of these phrases sounds a half step too high for me
And the chords are the same throughout all of it
Haha well actually its a minor 1 to a minor 5 which a stupid progression and very different. But later its c-c-g 1st inv-g 2nd inv... so its sounding weird yes hahA thst synth at a stRt is agredx a little annoying but later when i add the lowere octVe to it i think it sounds alot better to me. But thanks you!!
For criticism the synth at 27 seconds feels kind of off, that's probably on purpose but personally I don't like the sound very much. I really like the deep, subtle bass, als good use of the rassel. The break has some very odd chords in it, idk if they're right for this type of style. The perc is very nice, good job :)
If your talking about the pad its a preset of my own modified its core sound and lfoed a few voices different but still all my synths requires much trial and error. And thank you joel i recognized my skill at making them. I put quite a bit of work on the perc but it still wasnt all i wanted and excpected it to be still.
dude how did you make da synth at