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gravity (ft. RDz)

okin, RDz
824 Oct 25, 21 Lo-Fi
0:00 / 2:55
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Lo-Fi onyx LoFi rdz okin beats CC BY 131 BPM

[track 8] follow RDz here > @onyx > https://www.instagram.com/rdzxflipz - "seriously go check RDz's other tracks, the man is an insanely gifted vocalist and creator so you're doing yourself a dis-service by not listening to the gems he releases. was amazing to get another track in the works together and as always hope you all enjoy what we created." - okin - "it was an honor working with okin again. the ideas he brings to the table always inspire me, which is why i really enjoyed making this song. hope you like it!" - RDz - [lyrics] I've always fought alone But what's the point when I can't win Bleak visions weigh me down And down I fall, down I fall again - So here I am, here I am Is it all worth saving Here I am, here I am Or am I overthinking When the world starts shattering And stars begin to fade Can I still find my sanctuary Or is this all that's left - When I'm free-falling Through an endless Twilight sky I'm slowly fading Waking up, building up My will to fly again As I'm free-falling And fighting gravity

         
Jan 25, 22

Vocals and production are unanimously compatible. Great work yall.

Jan 28, 22

thanks, much appreciated!

Jan 26, 22

Thank you for appreciating it

Dec 2, 21

what a beauty, real melancholic vibes in this, fantastic work! <3 And as always RDz has such a gorgeous voice. If i could recommend some changes? As Dublion said below, some highs on the kick would be great. Or if not some highs, then some slight saturation on the kick to bring out its mids a tad would be fine.

Dec 2, 21

i know the feeling. even after 2 years, mixing vocals still frustrates me at times haha

Dec 2, 21

Feel free to DM me guys, always happy to help out! Vocals are so so tricky. I remember my first time mixing rap vocals and I must've spent 3 days straight numbing my brain listening to the same phrase about 1,00,000 times hahaha

Dec 2, 21

As someone new to vocal editing and fixing I'm way out of my depth lol, however I'll try and check out the kicks and add what has been said. Might have to PM you about it Ollie :)

Dec 2, 21

thanks ollie! really appreciate the useful feedback. i'll definitely play around with the vocal compression. that's something i'm working to improve on for future songs :)

Dec 2, 21

And with the vocals; (vocals are real tricky anway), some dynamic compression would help a lot, i.e when RDz goes into the higher registers, some volume is lost (a common thing for male vocalists, higher registers are harder to project, no criticism there :D). Compressing them would ensure the same volume throughout the delivery. Additionally, you can 'ride' the vocals to make the compressors job easier

Nov 17, 21

<3

Nov 16, 21

u made a pretty cool song, i would suggest editing the main vocals to fit the track more but everything is pretty cool on the song!

Oct 26, 21

I seriously don't know why I like this.But, tbh, this IS pretty good

Oct 26, 21

we both put a lot of effort in this so any positive response is always appreciated thanks

Oct 25, 21

Quality work here :) As I get the style is lofi, this is probably a personal choice. You could add a little more high end to the kick. I wouldn't say it's muddy but it contrasts with how clear the song is.

Oct 25, 21

thanks dublion! appreciate the feedback :)

Oct 25, 21

Thank you bro for the suggestion If I get round to looking back in the draft I'll test it ;) much respect

Oct 25, 21

Very beautiful work my friend

Oct 25, 21

thank you, friend :)

Oct 25, 21

Absolutely beautiful! Great work guys :]]

Oct 25, 21

Thanks for checking