I tried to edit the sample alot but the vocals were just plain and simple not good because there were too many leaps and too many quick notes in succession, i tried to do what you said and change the mixing, but my mixing skills are just not quite there yet lol
like it is fine , fine for the first 17 bars and then your ears hurt because you want it stop i am deleting the section i hate it that bit took so long but i hate it
I wish this was a full track it is so goood