Let me explain:

So I came up with this melody and I spent exactly 3 days thinking of what I can do with it. Out of frustrations and headaches I just went the usual route. Anyways this is my first actual beat without a main sample (except for all the drum oneshots I used). So anyway basically just tell me what you think should change. P.S. I'm going to post this on some people's walls, I have 3 in mind right now.

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  • Okay here's the problem with that. Times I do come up with melodies I'm at school or any other place where I can't access AT so I end up forgetting them. And when I am on AT I can't come up with anything.... That's why I'm trying to learn how to play piano. Ooh speaking of which I need to talk to my cousin about that. Brb

  • ...btw you should keep making your own melodies. and beats

  • dog. haven't heard tracks like this in a while.

  • If I'm not mistaken G-Funk is the Snoop Dogg, Easy E, Dr. Dre and all those other artists sound right? If so that would make sense cause I'm born and raised in California lol.

  • I'll have to mess around with it. Just wait, one night my creative side is just going to flip on and I'll make something dope. But thanks for your feedback.

  • This is amazing already, in my honest opinion. Awesome melody. I think what you are missing are some lyrics (;

    maybe tweak the synth around :57 .. less screechy?