Damn!
Back In The Game featuring Jet.
big thanks to him for joining me on this track and rappin,
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part of the SHATTERED album.
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who is jet O_O
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nonononoice bro :), work more on that mixing and you will be good
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critique has arrived
(1) the intro is really nice, the arp is very soothing and the percussion is solid. i like the chorus/beat, the rapping is actually really nice (big ups jet!). i like the actual beat itself as well. its a tad generic but it works. the build although, is very empty. theres nothing more than a kick, 808, vocal chops, and 1 riser, could use a lot of work. the drop suffers from similar problems, its very empty. needs more sounds frankly. the actual bell (main drop lead) is...
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Thanks mane appreciate it fun fact the first verse i me rappin and the second verse is jet rappin ye
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(3) overall solid track! i love the ideas you went for, and frankly the execution isnt half bad. it just sounds very rushed. the drops and builds are very naked feeling, could use some added depth. but besides that bud this is a solid tune, possesses a lot of energy! definitely will come back to listen again.
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(2)...not enough to carry the entire drop. i like the whistle that comes in but besides that it sounds rushed. not much going on. the bridge is good, does a great job of creating energy, but could use a little cleaning up (reverb is eh, vocals are a little too deep at the beginning). while the 2nd build is kinda non-existent though, it works much better. i like it. the 2nd drop is also a huge improvement, much more depth to the bell with the added brass and melody. it adds impact, love it a lot.
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Work on dat sound design. Clean it up. So actually the mixing. Idk I'm tired
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I need some crit on this
