While sound may not be good, I'm slowly going up with production value. Definitely need to work on melody (I think if I write in sheet music, I'll improve that), drums (will try rythm expirements soon), and probably a bunch else. I guess it's probably about the time I'll start getting more serious about music, so critique is welcome.
amazing ...yeah right this is not a critique anyway from here it's sound good if you are not a dj go in a bar and ask him to play it you will see how ppl react to it ... let's dance :)
If I may? No I don't think you should extend any parts arche's right the changes are good and you have the rising scale theme running through it. only thing I can think of right now is maybe blend in the bit crusher at the beginning? Just my two pence. :)
I like the way it begins and leads into the track. I think the bass is slowing a high energy track. What may work is have it gate or wobble after the first quarter of the note. I like changes and fast energy.