Become Human

Become Human

Midori (hiatus)
437 Jan 21, 2019 EDM
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Hope you enjoy it. Please let me know what you think about it and leave a comment. Stay tuned ツ

RiMi [Hiatus]
RiMi [Hiatus] Feb 4, 2019

more edm than house imo, but sick as hell. Might wana try to fill the beat a bit more, melodies are rad tho great work :)

ERER41
ERER41 Jan 22, 2019

this is amazin! i love it!

HangR
HangR Jan 21, 2019

Holy crap, this is awesome! I feel like it could also belong in the soundtrack and future bass categories. Nice work!

Midori (hiatus)
Midori (hiatus) republished
Jan 21, 2019

-added arp -changed buildup a bit -changed chords

ExPe
ExPe Jan 21, 2019

LIVE FEEDBACK: Intro is nice, I like the intensity it already has! At around , I'm loving this melody, that synth with the attack on it (or whatever that may be) sounds really cool I like the percs in between the snare hits on this buildup Ooh, yes the main event has arrived! I like it! Although I feel as if it's missing something.. I'm not really sure what, maybe it's just my stereotypical thoughts getting in the way. It works, though!

Midori (hiatus)
Midori (hiatus) Jan 21, 2019

I'm a musician, no problem ;) I have a vague idea what you mean, but damn,...you hooked me, now I have to try it out xDD

ExPe
ExPe Jan 21, 2019

That's awkwardly specific but hope it sparks some ideas in your head. :)

ExPe
ExPe Jan 21, 2019

I think adding breaks in between the chords at different spots could help, then adding an arp that scales down in 16th notes on every beat for one measure on the fourth, eighth, twelfth, and sixteenth measure would be interesting, but that's my personal thought.

Midori (hiatus)
Midori (hiatus) Jan 21, 2019

If you have any suggestions, please let me know =)

Midori (hiatus)
Midori (hiatus) Jan 21, 2019

Thanks a lot for the nice and long feedback =) I think the same...anything is missing, but I have no idea what it is...maybe some fill-ins like an arp or something like that. o: Will check it out tomorrow :).

ExPe
ExPe Jan 21, 2019

Love that it never lost intensity from the second build up through the entire second chorus. Intensity is a great part of this and is kept well throughout the whole track. Good job, man!

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