Good Development and good sound, good atmosphere dark as I like.
Nov 12, 11
this is pretty dark , great sounds :) fav peace is 2.35 till 3.06 like all those nerveus sounds
Nov 11, 11
:D
Nov 11, 11
Meh, alright. Agree to disagree.
Nov 11, 11
And I think its too much for this track. Just like true delusional thinking, it is not always painful or harsh. At least that's how I'm justifying it :P
Nov 11, 11
I totally meant Db, yeah, I don't know why minor came into my mind. But I like the dark vibe it gives off, very suiting to this track I think.
Nov 11, 11
@Syntax: Do you mean Db? (there is no D-minor note LOL). Its D-Natural because it's an inverted Bdim triad. The Db does give it more tension. What's funny is that I think it gives off too dark a vibe, so I prefer the D-natural. I might use that triad combo later though because I did like the sound of the Db there.
Nov 11, 11
I think that second note should be a D-Minor instead of a D-Natural. That MIGHT be my only critique on this track. ;)
republished
Nov 10, 11
Just a few changes
Nov 9, 11
I do like this one alot
Nov 9, 11
This track can now be open for criticism. I am in much better space overall :). I've listened to it some more and almost think that if I refine it, it could be as good as Brutal Relationship or better.
Nov 9, 11
Hang in here, colleague !
Nov 9, 11
good intro, good beat and the last part is really good too really good athmospher e in this part
Nov 9, 11
Thanks all. If I don't think about it much, it is fine, but I keep getting reminded of one problem or another on the way to getting my daughter help and her current status. It's also a waiting game. Fortunately we have at least one doctor who hasn't wait-listed or said no to us, but they're 2 hours away. But at least we'll see if we can get her on some med management to help her.
If nothing else, you're getting music from me, good/bad/indifferent. I'll just try to get listening again to everyone else's stuff as much as I can.
Nov 9, 11
Hang in there Arche!
Nov 9, 11
peace
Nov 9, 11
Hope things get better soon mate! :)
Nov 9, 11
i hope u can be happy soon...i'm with you...good luck joshua!!
Nov 9, 11
Those synths remind me of like millions of insects crawling around on something! Wow! That's pretty fookin' rad! Beats are cool too. Has like a ska/reggae thing going on, but in an entirely arche way. Never heard anything like it!
Sorry to hear you're going through hard times. Hope it all works out the best way it can. This is a freakin' amazing track though. Your feelings have produced something really intense and pure. That's awesome!
BTF
Good Development and good sound, good atmosphere dark as I like.
this is pretty dark , great sounds :) fav peace is 2.35 till 3.06 like all those nerveus sounds
:D
Meh, alright. Agree to disagree.
And I think its too much for this track. Just like true delusional thinking, it is not always painful or harsh. At least that's how I'm justifying it :P
I totally meant Db, yeah, I don't know why minor came into my mind. But I like the dark vibe it gives off, very suiting to this track I think.
@Syntax: Do you mean Db? (there is no D-minor note LOL). Its D-Natural because it's an inverted Bdim triad. The Db does give it more tension. What's funny is that I think it gives off too dark a vibe, so I prefer the D-natural. I might use that triad combo later though because I did like the sound of the Db there.
I think that second note should be a D-Minor instead of a D-Natural. That MIGHT be my only critique on this track. ;)
Just a few changes
I do like this one alot
This track can now be open for criticism. I am in much better space overall :). I've listened to it some more and almost think that if I refine it, it could be as good as Brutal Relationship or better.
Hang in here, colleague !
good intro, good beat and the last part is really good too really good athmospher e in this part
Thanks all. If I don't think about it much, it is fine, but I keep getting reminded of one problem or another on the way to getting my daughter help and her current status. It's also a waiting game. Fortunately we have at least one doctor who hasn't wait-listed or said no to us, but they're 2 hours away. But at least we'll see if we can get her on some med management to help her. If nothing else, you're getting music from me, good/bad/indifferent. I'll just try to get listening again to everyone else's stuff as much as I can.
Hang in there Arche!
peace
Hope things get better soon mate! :)
i hope u can be happy soon...i'm with you...good luck joshua!!
Those synths remind me of like millions of insects crawling around on something! Wow! That's pretty fookin' rad! Beats are cool too. Has like a ska/reggae thing going on, but in an entirely arche way. Never heard anything like it! Sorry to hear you're going through hard times. Hope it all works out the best way it can. This is a freakin' amazing track though. Your feelings have produced something really intense and pure. That's awesome!