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LuckyMax
Apr 13, 12

Excellent use of dissonant chords, making a beautiful track! Love it ! :)

Skyvoicer
Mar 29, 12

Beautiful Melody and sounds !!! ;)

Ryan W.
Apr 18, 11

Great Song +++

io
Mar 13, 11

Very very good song !!! :D

dtmm (old: hellomynameis)

I think that this is a really great song. i actually like the drop off after the build up. its like this really energetic part, then you take a quick break, and then it goes into the same melody but with the dissonant chords...which i enjoy a lot. Excellent job man! one of my favorites.

shoes
Jan 19, 11

Yeah I only realized how muddy it is after I already published it. I may end up messing around with it some more.

clouddrone
Jan 19, 11

haha No I would just mess it up. If i were going to remix it I would just take those 4 bars out and that would hardly feel right for me. Really, its a stellar tune man.

Astrum
Jan 19, 11

I like it this a lot. The only thing I would recommend is to maybe use the machiniste to get cleaner percussion sounds, mostly for the groove in the beginning section. Really nice though.

shoes
Jan 19, 11

I like it the way it is. If you want to change anything, remix it! I like to hear others' interpretations of my songs.

clouddrone
Jan 18, 11

I ask of you one thing only, that you fix the build up drop with the 8th note bassdrum crescendo. I really think it should go straight into the next part and drop on the first beat after the build up instead of having the noise thing die down. I know its your song and all, but I really love the energy of that part and I think that pause just kills the anticipation. This is like an A and it could be an A+. :P then again I'm just some random dude on the webs.