Cover Credit: https://pixabay.com/photos/wrought-craft-anvil-wrought-1789457/
Drop B Tuning
C# Minor Blues / Dorian Blues
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Lyrics:
Leave you in the dirt, Leave you in the Dust,
Leave you in the rain, Watch as you Rust,
Leaving you behind, Leave nothing but disgust,
Leave you in your place, Face Down in the Mud,
Hammer hits anvil, sparks start flying,
Careful round here cuz the metals hot,
Knocked back down but keep on trying,
better be ready to give it all you got,
x2
Ha Ha No,
Leave you in the cold, Leave you in the rain,
Leave you with your thoughts, leave you with your pain,
Leave you with your life as it goes right down the drain,
Leave you with your mess cuz i'm not the one to blame
Hammer hits anvil, sparks start flying,
Careful round here cuz the metals hot,
Knocked back down but keep on trying,
better be ready to give it all you got,
x2
Ha Ha No,
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This my Kublai Khan't style of metalcore xD
Written by Me :)
drums needs to be a lil louder. Where is the kick. I can't really hear the kick. The guitar top lead can have a lil more high end. Bass guitar is GAS. Otherwise it's beautiful.
Oct 18, 24
thanks appreciate the feedback :)
republished
Oct 17, 24
Mad mixing skillz Son xD the mix probably sucks tho xD
Guitar mixing
louder drums & kick boost
drums needs to be a lil louder. Where is the kick. I can't really hear the kick. The guitar top lead can have a lil more high end. Bass guitar is GAS. Otherwise it's beautiful.
Mad mixing skillz Son xD the mix probably sucks tho xD