Dolmdrums

Kiradina
65 Jul 31, 14 Other
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I based it off a book I was reading for the summer I love it Kiradina

         
Aug 2, 14

Nice inspiration

Jul 31, 14

Thats nice

Jul 31, 14

Cooleo. Pretty good, just needs some more... Depth, I guess. But it's still pretty cooleo :3

Jul 31, 14

yes.

Jul 31, 14

the good thing is you try to make your tracks with synths so you can tweak them until all fits together

Jul 31, 14

and the bass line in the begging has way too much dissonance. you can fix that by bringing down the decay and release.

Jul 31, 14

ouch.... i... you have great ideas but you really need to masterthis... i can see that this track has amazing potential. as do you. just learn how to master a little and it should be perfect. :) and mix it up and spice things up a bit. add some more flavor. but ur headed the right way for sure :)

Jul 31, 14

please don't spam me ._.